PrantedMutter.SloughOfDespond History

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June 12, 2008, at 09:53 AM by OtherMichael - pronunciation xref
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The slough[^pronounced slū, slou^] is wet, smelly, still wet, and has green things floating just beneath [[the]] surface.
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The slough[^[[WordSalad/SayItAgain|pronounced]] slū, slou^] is wet, smelly, still wet, and has green things floating just beneath [[the]] surface.
 
 
October 27, 2007, at 08:55 AM by OtherMichael - description, and a reflection upon moisture
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(:description abandon all hope, unless you've brought waterproof boots:)
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Dark as damp.

Sometimes [[Tapeloops|drier]], but never completely.


 
 
March 09, 2007, at 02:58 PM by OtherMichael - the linked up, pronounciation link
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The slough is wet, smelly, still wet, and has green things floating just beneath the surface.

Miasma as miasma.
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The slough[^pronounced slū, slou^] is wet, smelly, still wet, and has green things floating just beneath [[the]] surface.

Miasma as miasma.



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March 09, 2007, at 09:05 AM by OtherMichael -
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Miasma.
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Miasma as miasma.
 
 
March 06, 2007, at 02:10 PM by OtherMichael - wet
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The slough is wet, smelly, still wet, and has green things floating just beneath the surface.

Miasma.